Once I was proud.

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You sought to deceive me once more
but you are discovered,
your lies are the edge of the sword
the point of the dagger
and I feel...

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I want to cry,
I really want to cry,
I want to cry and sob
and just let the tears flow.
I want to collapse on the floor
...

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This reminds me of the famous morning after statement.................."OOoohh! My aching head,...never again!"


Nice...

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Spiders are my nemesis, anything else, no real problem (mmmm?) Nice piece MHenry. Enjoyed the read.

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The decisions you reflect in your writing will always cause heartache and indecision. Nice write, thanks for sharing.

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Hi there.


Muttado1sb, RhymeLovingWriter, MHenry, Bobby Del Boy, The second.

Lovely, lovely comments. Thank you all very...

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Just a scattering of old records
laying on floorboards bare
and my eye is drawn to a corner,
the stereo once stood there.
The...

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A sickening truth of how we used to think we were better than our darker skinned bretheren. A story/narrative well told, but still very disturbing....

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Hello all


RhymeLovingWriter, grant hayes, MHenry, Tony Grannell, Bry89, lunar glide. Muttado1sb.


Thankyou,...

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No sympathy for any drink driver. Nicely put Chester B. Enjoyed the read, thanks.

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We're well on our way with this. Alarmingly, there's a lot of truth in what you have written so well about. Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you for such a lovely thought.

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As a mother, she can be so cruel
so fickle at will,
do and be damned
let live, or kill.
She could kill me off
in the blink...

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Thoroughly, thoroughly enjoyed this. Shades of, Thomas Gray's " Elegy. " Thanks for sharing

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Gonna' need a valium tonight. Chilling read, thanks for sharing.