Extend the haiku chain....

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I'm loving the way that this post has been developed. It's fascinating to see the chain growing and evolving, and individually, there are some amazing...

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Trust? Impossible!
Innocence? Gone.....forever!
When will this pain end?

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Thanks for the encouragement RhymeLovingWriter. I fancied a challenge and quite enjoyed the discipline of this idea,; it's a great thing to do when the...

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Just follow your heart
For there, dreams are created,
Nurtured and treasured.

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Walk with me quietly,
study the way
The charm of the night
brings its magic in play
The moon casts its net on
the will...

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Hi RhymeLovingWriter,
Thamks for joining in. I know that haikus traditionally shouldnt rhyme, but hey, we're making our own rules up here anyway...

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Path illuminate
Guide me to my beloved
Fling open the gate

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The overdue arrival of some lovely spring weather here in England has made me appreciate the accuracy of this beautiful personification even more deeply......

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Great lesson for me there Kate: don't over-analyse and just enjoy! Haha. Meanwhile, maybe the accidental effectiveness of the rhyme scheme change is a...

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Acting without care
We should swing into action,
As if like lightning.

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Our memories etched
On a hundred year oak tree
Forever remain

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5,7,5
Your first line of 5 is therefore...

Let's brighten things up

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Oops, I pressed post by accident before I had finished explaining! In short, if you fancy extending the haiku chain just continue with the next stanza,...

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Heres my haiku chain:
I start it with my haiku.
Now you continue....

Now you continue
By taking my final line
As...

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Your poem lists so many lovely aspects of a true community, sharing the celebrations and the sadnesses of every-day life. I love the contrast in the...