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I do love this "to the point" poem. Sharp pointLeave a comment:
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I like mincemeatery and gnat-straining. Both PPoet and mblack gave me very good feedback, I printed both. -
Grant, I want to understand. After all the comments, especially the one to mooneyblack, lets me see some of the meaning and
the possibility of...Leave a comment:
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I now have two other versions printed out to compare to mine. This should be a great help.
Any more appreciated or just advice. Cut this, delete...Leave a comment:
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Though sounding sad, it becomes so lovely when I say it from my lips. I am concrete
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Oh, so nice. I like how you wrote about three thoughts, separately and then just tied it all together
to show us a dance. Your poem is kinda like...Leave a comment:
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I just noticed that you said butchered. hah, much nicer cuts of me. I am
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mooneyblack , thank you for taking your time to help make my thought more coherent. I will be printing
your very nice contribution and also Parkinsonspoet...Last edited by Brainwreck; 07-09-2017, 02:26 PM.Leave a comment:
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Nice, you left me hanging unless the name is ImposterLeave a comment:
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Thanks for that RLW. Guess I will have to join uh, uh whatever it is that you can view movies.
I have been wanting to see a movie that I saw as...Leave a comment:
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amenOra, you certainly can if you want to. his is way over my head. I will read it several more times in the future.Leave a comment:
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WOW WHOA WOW...I liked the first version and love the second version. The sylph-like line is better at the end.
You elicited so many comments about...Leave a comment:
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Wicked come-back haiku. It rocks. Sin. yep I love it.
Thank you for taking time to read and pen a new haiku.
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Thank you. RLW. It was supposed to be Bird Sense not Birds Sense. Don't guess it matters.
I have another problem you may be able to help me with....
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