Loss

[acockyone]

I enjoyed reading this quite a bit. Thank you for sharing.

[acockyone]

We are all perpetually on the verge of losing...
all civility
all sanity
all virility
all vanity
all stability
all...

[acockyone]

we are all perpetually
on the verge of losing
all civility
all sanity...

[acockyone]

I appreciate the vulnerability you show in the second to last verse. Way to pour yourself into your writing.

[acockyone]

A lot of work went into crafting these rhymes.

[acockyone]

When I read this I am reminded of Puritan-filled ships crossing unforgiving seas...

[acockyone]

Each of us are but a minute portion
Components of a larger organism
Operating in perfect proportion
Agents of community and altruis...

[acockyone]

Drawbacks to the idea of community
Constantly fearful of status quos
Of rigorous conformity
Of mindlessness, normality
Of white...