Haiku

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I invite everyone to criticize me, please... I want to get better

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Yes, so please criticize. I myself do not like "prose", and the sad poems (lost love) which are too easy to write. I quit writing sad poems....

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Raining sounds outside
sea birds fly silently by
Jessica sleeping

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Thanks. I also like this poem. You write some really nice poems.

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Elephant McDuff has an invisible friend
fox kathy beautiful, kind and easy to pretend
she is funny, sly and cunning
in her dress she...

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penguin toes is celebrating
a birthday in which she is negating
my vision of a child
expert in great big smiles

what is...

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looking out on the ocean
seeing the seagull's endless motion
floating effortlessly in the wind
their flight seems to never end
...

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as i walk down the street
by chance a girl i meet
looking into each other's eyes
my mind begins to fantasize

she wore...

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This was not my cat, but for some reason she took to me. She would run in front of me and get in my chair. She never did this to its owner. She never...

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I check in about one time per day.

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here no more for they have gone
the wheelbarrow thoughts i dwell upon
mom, dad and brother have passed away
this tool reminds and is...

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Very nice

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Elephant McDuff has fallen down
on his face tears and a frown
the tumble down the hill was really bad
he runs home to his mom and dad...

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Sweet heart, my love dove
she who shines from above
a love born from the light
your warts and moles are my delight

one...

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birds sing, bees sting
lyndsey sits upon the front porch swing
she watches the cars pass by
with a frown and a tear in her eye
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