Immortal

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Oh? These two are related to each other somehow? I would've thought that Artificial and this would have come connection, in a certain way. Thanks for...

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I never thought of that when I wrote this... just about being immortal in general

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When chaos rained, and I stood there
I thought it would bring an end to me
Even though this was unexpected
At least I can still stand...

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I am original form
Where everything is in its place
I am simplicity
And I am glad to remain this way
I am the perfection
...

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Every face
Everyone
Every true aspect
Long gone
Nothing's real
In this world
Nothing makes sense
In this made-up...

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Sorry to hear about your friend, but at least he survived and still with you. Thanks for your comment, and sharing this story with us

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No, I did not write this from personal experience... I'm merely trying to explore how people respond to fear itself. Can't really see how this can be...

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That was what I intended... especially when I had this song in mind when I wrote it > https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TxQ4W3UpU2w

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Things don't last forever
And neither do I
On cloud nine, only for a short time
Don't make it the final time

Everlasting...

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I admit that I am scared
Of pretty much anything
But you however
You resist to everything
And I wonder how
How can you breathe...

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The sky is green
The dancing trees
A place where we can fly
Come on, join me
The purple ocean
The many, smiling hills...

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Yes, celebrities fit the description of the first two lines well which was my intention, and the thought held in mind when I quickly wrote it down. Don't...

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I was thinking of having "Corruption" as the title, as in how humanity is corrupt and with it shown to everyone via the Internet without them...

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Erm... a bit. I know it is my poem at least but I just wanted feedback about it. Though you couldn't say much about it, could you suggest a title for...

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The following is a quick (and a bit random) draft that I had written, and I wonder if anyone can help with it, and even come up with a simple title for...

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Thank you Though I have to admit that I found this a bit difficult to write about, even for how the refrain should go (and that I did intend to not...

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Indeed ;D Glad you liked it

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Reprimands
Your allergy
These few reactions
Concealed insanity
Emotions
Too much to take
Just a single word
...

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Unconscious, yet aware
Of moving pictures
Fast-moving animation
But I can't take in

Something that mattered
Something...

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Invisible walls, they have built
For what reason, for what logic?
The cries for liberty
Seem so microscopic

And if the...