Dialogue during half-sleep

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you bring shadows into a new light. excellent.

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a smooth venture into a wonderful subject. well done!

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well done! made me laugh thank you!

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I will remember the last lines of this poem forever tanner. among the most beautiful i have read.

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I enjoyed this one! im glad at most any work that rejects the path pseodo-smart people set for the world.

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this poem is on another level. you resolve one of the greatest challenges in writing, how do you make the reader experience the work rather than just...

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excellent!

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I'm thrilled by the reception here! all of the poets here are influential. Suzzen you are highly original!

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there's a prayerful quality to this one that is touching. the simpler the better as far as im concerned. the words and the thought should fit naturally....

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i really enjoy your perspective ! fresh and bright....

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i feel the warmth too! excellent

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well done PP. work like this is important in the face of evil.

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i agree. hate whips much of the air in cyberspace..twitter is the capital of fear ..rhymezone is one of the few stray stars thanks to work like this.

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this is gorgeous RLW. simple suits you beautifully.

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but it is getting more difficult to say "racism is dead". that's at least a better starting point to fight it....

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i agree with all the praise here. especially for that one line!...

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thank you ATL...

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I love the details in this one. the use of the word Jonesin, the mark of cain, etc... this is a very important poem. I think one of the unintentional...

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lol the moon. sleeping on no legs in the sky. eye half open. connected to us supernaturally by something so strong, but unreachable. thank you for...

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Disconsolate stork
half asleep in the sky
what kind of sense does it make?
our hearts
hot precision...