a smile can change the hour

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if you were sick -- stranded
in the walls of a sterile hospital
walls lined with beds
and artificial meds --
if you could live...

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Big ideas and sentiment here. Very sanguine, somber, and makes me remember!

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I like this a lot!

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pocket of
shadows
fathom 'you'
for a dress
today pink
each tingling
branch
trees past
the very last...

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Complementary pieces! So, great last line, really perfect and punching. Profound... And I relate it a lot to myself, have personal connections to the...

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it made no difference but I

still remembered.

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thought we hated each
other but i could never tell
left and kept something
after all of the time gone
waited for myself to stay...