someone said

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Someone said
Life is fading
'mongst the mossy caves
slick with your
fingerprints the sky or
hovering in a frozen center...

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millions of faces are blurred
the very lips obscured
as these years they have wandered
scarred without reprieve,
a doleful and...

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put your face in close
brimming flames of rose
the teeth cut by a knife
in an obscure face of death
the inviting grin
so...

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Why is it so easy for secrets to control? Is it because of a specific weakness within our ... character? Are secrets justified, and who does the ratio...

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Ship

Sails all afurrowing.
In your sideways glance
I have one more chance
To catch you

going

...

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here's to a future
where we each who have a loving
burning beating heart love. so much
that we would love everyone on earth.
we...

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Familiar, ours was just out yesterday. The last line was beautiful actually. Very metaphorical but sensorial. I sure know this feeling, that DEADZONE....

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This was interesting and yeah I was a bit unsure as to how to read it, as in what inflections or stresses were necessary. But it made me think that it...

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I like the language/diction here and the theme, good job and familiar. Only thing I thought was perhaps take away the last comma, but that would be personal...

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the slide is cracked in half;
doors to
sour morning sunshine barred
beneath the neat
scarred earth fuming with feet
messages...

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Autumn is a great mirror of my spirit--
when it comes with its lyrics
bursting forth in scaled leaves,
and pushes; past the broken sewerlid,...

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I love your creativity, still... sort of a wry tone and cautionary, resolute. Liked the pivotal "motion" of this one