great dark birds - lyrics

[victor]

i'm anxious to hear your changes... perhaps there's a better way to communicate than a message board?

[victor]

i have tried to follow your suggestions... alsoi have modified
the chorus from verse to verse (just slightly), but of course
the first can...

[victor]

thanks for the feedback. i'll carry on. will post again soon

[victor]

great dark birds

self medication has some risks
we know them all too well
but news of side effects
isn't based on fact...

[victor]

try these. i hope they help. i'm very impressed with the music. please let me know what you think. i can modify.

Need lyrics song 01 May...

[victor]

this is totally beautiful. magical