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  • rapgod
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    Just what i looking. thx
    192.168.1.1
    Last edited by rapgod; 06-10-2017, 02:19 AM.

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  • Sumyanna
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    Wonderful use of the words Raku I think I do like the new line... One that they were able to do as payback. It falls off the tongue more easily than the first one, I think. Excellent job.

  • Raku
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    The Raid

    Irate soldiers raid an uppity village during a stormy night
    Robbing them blind they steal their incredible tangy fruit without a fight
    It was a well coordinated plan of attack
    One that they were able to do as payback

    The poor village woke up to a very important education
    All they could do was scold each other in frustration
    But they realized they had to hurry and prepare for the next assault
    They would go and hide all their treasures in a sealed tight vault

    Edit: Replaced original fourth line "One that they were able to do with out a backtrack" with "One that they were able to do as payback"

    Let me know which one you like better.
    Last edited by Raku; 06-19-2016, 06:09 AM.

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  • Suz-zen
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    These are all so wonderful!! Loved reading all! So different! each and every one! I am not getting anything tonight from the writing Gods or Goddesses! Will try to see who speaks to me tomorrow! Goodnight all!!

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  • Sumyanna
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    Thank you very much +Muttado1sb - it is the blind, beautiful fools that make this world a beautiful place, I think :-)

  • Muttado1sb
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    Thank you.

  • Muttado1sb
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    A blind, beautiful fool. Life is what you make it. Lovely, Sumyanna.

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  • Sumyanna
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    Lovely write - dreamlike lunar glide

  • Sumyanna
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    Oh wow - love this. Excellent One Wingless Angel

  • Sumyanna
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    Wow. Strong write. Especially love the line "I'm just a piece of irate garbage you'd discard." Strong... One Wingless Angel

  • Sumyanna
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    Love this - love the story you told. Better hurry Muttado1sb !

  • Sumyanna
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    Oh you made me smile. Love it MHenry

  • MHenry
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    Poetry Word Prompt #6

    She had an incredible education
    But she was stormy and irate
    She was very uncoordinated
    And her lips had a tangy taste
    She got uppity in a hurry
    And then she’d scold you blind
    So, you see why I write poems about her?

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  • Muttado1sb
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    Don't Blame Me

    We better hurry to get this in
    or hope the storm is late,
    'cause if we don't that uppity scold
    is sure to be irate!
    Her temper is incredible,
    her fury can be blind.
    If you think the hurricane's stormy
    she'll just blow your mind.
    She may be tangy but she pays well,
    and it's her stuff we're packing,
    so get coordinated, don't blame me if she yells,
    your education is not lacking!

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  • One Wingless Angel
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    And this one:

    Who am I to say I never knew
    The incredible truth that I was clashing through,
    (AKA everyone around me was on a cue-)
    To scold me and hurry to run the time I needed the truth - I guess that's how it's going to be?
    Without single disregard for my sympathy?
    Is it alright to say I just wanna wait around to see
    The fire which is my anger and who survives when I'm finally cured-

    Nevermind, let's rearrange -
    Let's try a little bit more to disengage-
    Let's agree to always disagree and forget change-
    Loosin' up a little more with the rhythm of my songs;
    But of course it just a disregard,
    I'm just like a piece of irate garbage you'd discard,
    We say to stop when we have already gotten too far-
    And we are stuck above everything as heartache decides to intervene...

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