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  • imrogue
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    Present by His grace
    All these creatures, big and small
    Thankful for His Love

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Nurtured and treasured
    Child within his mother's womb
    Present by His grace.

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  • Smee
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    Just follow your heart
    For there, dreams are created,
    Nurtured and treasured.

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  • Mariont3155
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    Fling open the gate
    Take one step, then another
    Just follow your heart

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  • Smee
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    Hi RhymeLovingWriter,
    Thamks for joining in. I know that haikus traditionally shouldnt rhyme, but hey, we're making our own rules up here anyway so ,just for you, I've made my next response rhyme! (Truthfully, I am going cold turkey from rhyming so you have given me the perfect excuse to break from my self discipline. Thanks )

  • Smee
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    Path illuminate
    Guide me to my beloved
    Fling open the gate

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    As if like lightening
    Flashing clashing zig zag beam
    Path illuminate

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  • Smee
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    Acting without care
    We should swing into action,
    As if like lightning.
    Last edited by Smee; 05-05-2016, 07:28 AM.

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Forever remain
    Listening to heart's desires
    Acting without care

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  • Smee
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    Our memories etched
    On a hundred year oak tree
    Forever remain

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  • Sumyanna
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    Let's brighten things up
    before our time is over
    our memories etched...

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  • Smee
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    5,7,5
    Your first line of 5 is therefore...

    Let's brighten things up

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  • Poemahontas
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    What's the haiku syllable count....I'm ready

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  • Smee
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    Oops, I pressed post by accident before I had finished explaining! In short, if you fancy extending the haiku chain just continue with the next stanza, taking the last line of the one before. The challenge is to add some interest and humour but still provide a last line that will work as a first line for the next verse. Anybody fancy extending the chain now that I've finished explaining?!

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  • Smee
    started a topic Extend the haiku chain....

    Extend the haiku chain....

    Heres my haiku chain:
    I start it with my haiku.
    Now you continue....

    Now you continue
    By taking my final line
    As a starting point.

    As a starting point,
    This is so uninspiring!
    Let's brighten things up

    Let's brighten things up
    ......etc

    Anyone care to continue the haiku chain, with one haiku stanza at a time
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