Come Unity (Rhymezone 2016 Poetry Prize)

[danilove]

Come Unity
Provide us with boundless opportunity
Bring us back to the oneness we are
Heal the separations scar
Inspiration
Amongst every nation
Together we stand
Helping hand upon helping hand
Empowering one another
Joined as sister and brother
Community
We are free
Living happily
Saving humanity
Commitment
To the omnipotent
Understanding Unconditional Love
As we are all facets of the skies above

by: Danielle Kurliand

[Poemahontas]

Besides the space between your title.......our titles are identical.......

[danilove]

[Darthvader]

Love the use of rhyme. It helps the poem to read smoothly. Great job :-)

[danilove]

Thank you so much!!

[Odonko-ba]

A splendid write

[danilove]

Thank you!

[Sister Greed]

Could have done without the spam. Like your poem.

[danilove]

Thank you so much! .....I'm not sure what you mean by the spam part? I hope I didn't unknowingly send something. If I did I apologize to everyone.

[Rabondo]

I'm confused bc this poem showed in my flag reports, but I never viewed this, tf?
Cool poem btw

[danilove]

Thanks! I think some other person flagged me because we both thought of the same title. She took it like I imitated her but I would never do that. Takes the fun out of it

[D.F.Russell]

Flag reports appear to be being displayed for everyone. There were/are flag reports for this and another post with an almost identical name due to some comments that were considered to violate the TOU (Terms of Use) for the site. Ignore the reports, they'll go away in a couple of days.