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  • Come Unity (Rhymezone 2016 Poetry Prize)

    Come Unity
    Provide us with boundless opportunity
    Bring us back to the oneness we are
    Heal the separations scar
    Inspiration
    Amongst every nation
    Together we stand
    Helping hand upon helping hand
    Empowering one another
    Joined as sister and brother
    Community
    We are free
    Living happily
    Saving humanity
    Commitment
    To the omnipotent
    Understanding Unconditional Love
    As we are all facets of the skies above

    by: Danielle Kurliand

  • #2
    Besides the space between your title.......our titles are identical.......
    Last edited by Poemahontas; 05-15-2016, 02:11 PM.

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    • #3
      Last edited by danilove; 04-13-2016, 07:27 PM.

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      • #4
        Love the use of rhyme. It helps the poem to read smoothly. Great job :-)

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        • danilove
          danilove commented
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          Thank you so much!!

      • #5
        A splendid write

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        • danilove
          danilove commented
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          Thank you!

      • #6
        Could have done without the spam. Like your poem.

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        • danilove
          danilove commented
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          Thank you so much! .....I'm not sure what you mean by the spam part? I hope I didn't unknowingly send something. If I did I apologize to everyone.

      • #7
        I'm confused bc this poem showed in my flag reports, but I never viewed this, tf?
        Cool poem btw

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        • danilove
          danilove commented
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          Thanks! I think some other person flagged me because we both thought of the same title. She took it like I imitated her but I would never do that. Takes the fun out of it

      • #8
        Flag reports appear to be being displayed for everyone. There were/are flag reports for this and another post with an almost identical name due to some comments that were considered to violate the TOU (Terms of Use) for the site. Ignore the reports, they'll go away in a couple of days.

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