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  • monicabellucci123
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    Thanks for the interesting information. Accounting Assignment Help

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  • Bobby Del Boy
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    emmiebeecreations The good old days. Top of the queue. Look at all these amazing poets you brought together with your magnificence in writing. The best, just the best!

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  • cc springer
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    Emmiebee.... you drew me in with this poem. It took me to another place and time. Very nice.

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  • Suz-zen
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    emmiebeecreations thank you for this creation! I needed these sweet words this morning!

    To a rawness
    Of tender laughter, tired tears
    To light and growth and unquenchable love
    Then maybe...
    The two if us can belong to one another.

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  • Smee
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    The overdue arrival of some lovely spring weather here in England has made me appreciate the accuracy of this beautiful personification even more deeply...

    'I delight in the world's awakening
    Its yawning rebirth
    As it stretches green fingers into magnificent bloom'

    The imagery it creates is perfect: 'yawning rebirth' is my favourite of all. 😀

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  • Marianne Burgess
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    What a beautiful poem. Very well written.

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  • emmiebeecreations
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    I can't help but thrill when someone replies to my poem with a poem! That's what it's all about. Thanks for reading and leaving your beautiful words!

  • emmiebeecreations
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    Thank you so very much! It's a balance indeed! I've tried to hold both a winter-some relationship and a fairy-dust fling - neither work. Thank you kindly for reading and commenting!

  • Sister Greed
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    I like the tightrope walk you do between idealism and realism, as it's this balance that keeps the 'believers' of love sane. How should we earn the fairy dust without bone-cold trees and hills? I love the line about belonging to Nature and Nature's God. The comfort of that vastness and divine order. Beautiful poem!

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  • Smee
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    I belong in your world!
    All the beauty unfurled
    As I read all your wonderful phrases.
    Your world's a delight
    When I see with your sight
    Then the magic of nature amazes!
    So thank you for sharing
    A world full of caring:
    Your love of the world's without doubt.
    I've enjoyed your vision
    Expressed with precision;
    Your poem is lovely, throughout.

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  • emmiebeecreations
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    Thank you!! ^_^

  • emmiebeecreations
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    Thank you so much!

  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    What a beautiful invitation to community! Kudos!

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  • John Wertz
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    Hi Emmie, The parallel line lengths of the 12 line stanzas is appealing, as is the directness of the language. No need to be edgy when you have something to say. Puts me in mind of Amy Lowell.

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