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    Last edited by grant hayes; 12-25-2017, 09:18 PM.

  • #2
    Admittedly I am a novice, but wow Grant. That's all I can say!

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    • #3
      Thank you, O many sided 1. Your wow is much appreciated

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      • 1sided
        1sided commented
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        I like the name you've given me lol!

      • 1sided
        1sided commented
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        "a script of scars" beautiful!

    • #4
      Hi Grant, My interpretation: At first I suspected the God of the Old Testament as the terrorist, but suspect that you are thinking more of our current clash of civilizations. Wonder if I am in the ball park?

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      • #5
        I think you might be, John

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        • #6
          Chilling!

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          • #7
            Thank you for reading!

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            • #8
              Much like all your other writes...... EXCELLENT

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              • #9
                Many thanks, graydon.

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                • #10
                  Yes, it is a Terror! Well done,exceedingly so!

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                  • #11
                    Thank you for your enthusiastic response, R.writes.it. I am so surprised folks are getting this one.

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                    • R.writes.it
                      R.writes.it commented
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                      It speaks volumes. Aptly titled, also.

                  • #12
                    Terrifying Grant but done oh so well!!

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                    • #13
                      Your praise is much appreciated, Alexandra, O doyenne!

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                      • AlexandratheLate
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                        You honor me too much. Now I'm blushing. :-)

                    • #14
                      'Honour is milled in killing'. You don't write poems, You compose poetry. A semantic waltz is Terror. I found myself joyfully picking up the dictionary, and as always...learning.

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                      • grant hayes
                        grant hayes commented
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                        Aw shucks, Odonko-ba, you honour me blushed. Thank you for the encouragement. O, that my feed of Straussing might danube ever on, with an occasional trisch-trasch for a change of tempo.

                        'Semantic waltz': you should use that in something; that's a phrase to conjure with.

                    • #15
                      I love it! It's has this sense of chillingness that is worded so flawlessly it sends shivers through me. I really hope this one is picked as one of the winners- it's like the best one I've read so far.

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                      • grant hayes
                        grant hayes commented
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                        Strewth! (as we antipodean marsupials say) Thank you for your praise and encouragement, Nicole! Much appreciated.

                        'Terror' may not relate closely enough to the Community theme to do well, I suspect. There are so many wonderful entries that address that theme more directly and clearly. I posted it here though because it says something about the antithesis of community - the annihilation of human values by forces that brandish 'god' as their weapon (or which a particular 'god' uses as weapons: there is a truly chilling thought).
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