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  • Freedom

    wars
    pillage
    disease
    religion
    money
    God
    soul
    attrition
    governments
    environment
    man
    condemn
    hope
    space
    future
    question
    abortion
    children
    hunger
    apathy
    mortgage
    empathy
    judaism
    catholicism
    islam
    baptist
    banks
    greed
    gluttony
    foreclosure
    black
    white
    division
    impasse
    blind
    death
    legions
    secret
    collaborate
    destruction
    abscond
    nigger
    fag
    honkey
    jew
    fat
    skinny
    tall
    short
    ignorance
    intolerance
    hope
    hate
    love
    death
    poverty
    wealth
    displacement
    abstract
    reality
    agony
    distrust
    temperament
    conglomerate
    drugs
    pharmaceutics
    capitalist
    socialist
    fascist
    conformity
    world
    domination
    society
    downfall
    atrophy
    silent
    protest
    propagate
    murder
    life
    precious
    dream
    regress
    degenerate
    exfoliate
    human
    substance
    into
    nothing
    hell
    on
    earth
    freedom
    a
    f****ng
    mockery

  • #2
    Excellently expressed points of view! Bravo....!

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    • Odonko-ba
      Odonko-ba commented
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      Thank you poet

  • #3
    Nothing else to focus on!

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    • #4
      ?

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      • #5
        I like this poem. The form is very cool. I also, finally looked up haiku and went back and read your poetry again.
        I liked it before, but now I am so much more impressed. I did not know what it took to stay in the parameters.
        You are a poet.

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        • #6
          Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment. I can't lie I follow no certain form or structure. My grammar grade school and I wouldn't know a verb from a proposition. But that doesn't stop me from writing. I love poetry. And I enjoy experimenting with writing it. So believe me when I say I am humbled by all the encouraging words. Thank you again poet for reading my writing.

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          • Brainwreck
            Brainwreck commented
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            I do not know form and structure except for a limerick. Your way of putting it all together the way you did made it
            seem strong to me. I am horrible at English and just started with poetry about a year ago. But, I do know
            when I like something. I am going to try writing a poem with one word lines soon. Cool.

        • #7
          Cool. And I will be waiting to read it.

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          • #8
            Remarkable! It's ironic that we (human beings) think of several of the things mentioned in your poem on a daily basis, without even realizing it!!!

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            • #9
              Yes this is true. We take it all for granted. Until it affects us personally. Freedom is not free, for we certainly pay the price. Thanks for the support.

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