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    Understanding will guard you
    And set you apart,
    From those without knowledge
    And an ungrateful heart.

    Understanding will guard you
    Grasp it with your mind,
    See through all the facts
    Stay mindful and kind.

    Understanding will guard you
    Perceive it from all views,
    Valuing the wisdom given
    And the ability to make do.

    Understanding will guard you
    On the unsimplicity of life,
    Abstract the meaning
    Could lead to less strife.

    Nikki (Rosepine, Louisiana)
    Last edited by mouche_a_mielle; 01-04-2015, 05:53 AM.

  • #2
    Nikki, you wrote a nice poem! With a few changes it could be great. Try this Stay mindful and kind in place of Being mindful and staying kind! Poems of this type need to flow. I hope you didn't mine my comment, I really do like your poem! The kurlman

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    • #3
      No sir don't mind at all. Thank you for your time.

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      • #4
        Great poem!

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        • #5
          Great work Nikki, good flow and rhyme.. but the message is the best part, it is very much like the message of my entry (The Middle Ground). Would love for you to read it if you have the chance? - Jeremy

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