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    POEM # 124

    LETTERS ON MY CLOTHES
    A&B'S between my toes,
    C&D'S up my nose!
    E, F&G in my pocket,
    H&I hanging on my locket!
    I see J, K&L in one eye,
    M&N hiding like a spy!
    Letters in one ear, or the other,
    Letters bouncing off one another!
    I found an O, with the P&Q's,
    All stuffed, in my shoes!
    Where are the R, S, T&U?
    They are hidden from view!
    I see all of the V's,
    On my elbows and knees!
    W, X, Y and Z, I feel in my hair,
    Strange, my head is bare!
    What caused this mess?
    You have one guess!
    Here is the scoop,
    I fell in my ALPHABET soup!

    Written by Carl Mann
    The kurlman
    4-29-14
    Pleasant Hill, Ohio

  • #2
    This would make a great children's book. Find a good artist, if you are not one yourself, to draw a bunch of silly pictures to go with this and you will have a best seller!

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    • #3
      Very cute and definitely agreed, fantastic for Children's book. I could see some adorable pictures with it. Well done.

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      • #4
        I should have read what Electron John wrote. What he said.

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        • #5
          WOW-WOW-WOW Thanks John, I have at least 50 more like these! How do I get started? I love critique , it has helped me improve 1000%! Can I HELP YOU OR ANYBODY JUST ASK?The kurlman

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          • #6
            Pearle Evelyn Whyte a BIG thank you! The best think I did was join a writing group. Then LISTEN and LISTEN and LISTEN! The kurlman

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