WHO'S IN MY ROOM

[The kurlman]

POEM #101

WHO'S IN MY ROOM
A cow in my room,
A cow with a broom!
A lion in my bed,
Is not yellow but red!
Animals three feet deep,
Quiet not even a peep!
Room filled side to side,
A giraffe called Clyde!
Some animals have been found,
On the ceiling upside down!
A rabbit sitting in my chair,
It has a blue bow in its hair!
Should I laugh or scream?
Is this just a dream?
Afraid to open my eyes,
These animals could be spies!
With eyes wide open I stare,
My oh my, my room is bare!

Written by Carl Mann
The kurlman
4-15-14
Pleasant Hill, Ohio

[Aenigma]

I enjoyed it -- had a touch of Ogden Nash, I thought.

[The kurlman]

D.F. RUSSELL, Sorry I missed answering your comment on my poem WHO'S IN MY ROOM! A very belated THANK YOU. The kurlman

[Electron.John]

Another one that would make a great children's book. Would love to see the artwork that you would pair up with each line. Nice work Carl.

[The kurlman]

Thanks Pamela, I like feedback! It was a CUTE POEM to write! The kurlman

[Pamela Baker]

cute!

[D.F.Russell]

This sort of thing is difficult to pull off.

[Sarah]

"I don't like green eggs and ham, I don't like them, sam-i-am." Not my taste, but done well.