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  • Day Into Night-Night Into Day

    POEM # 97

    DAY INTO NIGHT- NIGHT INTO DAY
    Look at the leaves,
    Hanging in the trees.
    Sun setting over the hill,
    Everything perfectly still.
    Feel the soft winds blow,
    See the stars bright glow.
    Daylight turns into night,
    Darkness is in sight!
    Bright moon overhead,
    Reflecting before bed.
    Darkness back to light,
    Not a whimper or fight.
    Morning dew on the ground,
    Footprints can be found.
    Sun rising so slight,
    Darkness out of sight!
    Look at the leaves,
    Hanging in the trees.


    Written by Carl Mann
    The kurlman
    4-5-14
    Pleasant Hill, Ohio

  • #2
    Great imagery. I like that you stay on course and wrap it up neatly. Many of the rhymes seem overly simple although they don't feel forced to me. I like it. Thanks for posting it Carl.

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