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  • Departure

    Amongst all good things, the best tend to quickly fade away
    Enclosed by the vivid mind, sweet ivory settles at bay
    Closely viewing the world as if in a crystal glass
    Waiting for the time to come to an end, the final green colors of the grass
    Creeping up behind, he beckons me to come on
    As I leave, he whispers, "Tell the gently caressed world so long."
    Stepping swiftly, we leave as the evening sky burns with care
    Closing my eyes, being separated, I'm gone, I'm finally here

  • #2
    Interesting. Imagery good... punctuation claws a bit, though

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    • #3
      Hehe, thanks

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