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    I stayed awake all night just counting the hours
    before waking you up to hugs, kisses, and flowers
    for ours was a day filled with much joy and laughter
    from the fancy-Nancy brunch, to the church service after
    and for the rest of the day I never had a doubt
    that the snow would melt away and the sun would come out
    and shine it did, showing the sparkle in your eyes
    Now I truly realize you're an angel in disguise
    These skies of blue always remind me of you
    A picture-perfect backdrop to a beauty so true
    The zoo was a zoo and the crowd was insane
    but like so many times before, I never heard you complain
    and the rain from the week brought out such vibrant hues
    and created at the gardens such magnificent views
    The roses truly rose to the fame of their name
    yet to your glory and splendor, they bowed down in shame
    for you stood out like a truly brilliant shining star
    The most beautiful of beauties, no matter where you are
    and like the star that you are...twinkling oh, so bright
    I had to have you home as it started getting night
    so after having dinner at your favorite place
    I held my arms open for a final embrace
    I catch a trace of your face...as I hug through you...like a vapor
    You didn't go away, mom...we had an amazing day, mom...even if only on paper...

  • #2
    Very nice, love the pattern and structure. Great job.

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    • #3
      I enjoyed this, good job man
      If you have time tell me what you think of my first post

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      • #4
        Right on! Thanks, guys. I wish I never had to write that one, yo. No doubt. I will definitely check out your post, Justice. Peace

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        • #5
          Great writing. Thanks for sharing
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          • #6
            Is it a poem? I really love reading it. I just missed my mom who's no longer with us.
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            • #7
              Excellent write-up. Are these memories of the past you are describing in your poem? Like childhood memories you had. Anyway, i like it and thank you for sharing this. Also, please check out these commercial concrete solutions if you're from Wichita Falls, Texas, and looking for a concrete company to handle any concreting for your business needs.

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              • #8
                I was moved by your write-ups. I just remember the happy days that I and my mom spent together when she was still alive. Thank you for sharing and please check out a friend's website who offers quality tree services in Longmont, Colorado.
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                • #9
                  That brings me some good memories back!
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