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    POEM # 341

    WHERE ARE YOU MY LOVE
    My body and soul floats far away,
    Endless thoughts of love, with much to say.
    Your sweet softness lives in my heart,
    Answer me please, why did we part?
    Waking hours your image is there,
    I must find you, show you I care.
    Your loveliness tattooed all over me,
    No cure for loneliness, I feel and see.
    Remembering your sweet tempting smile,
    Tender kisses in my arms your beguile.
    Quiet walks, silent talks, in the park,
    Consummating our love, virtuously no lark.
    Sleeping hours your spirit drifts by,
    Engulfing my soul, eyes are wet not dry.
    Tears flow down my cheeks, sweet and pure.
    Without you to hold and love, there is no cure.
    Whether it's a minute, day, week or year,
    I need to find you my love my dear.

    Written by Carl Mann
    The kurlman
    3-9-2015

  • #2
    Very Sweet! It felt tender at heart. You are an excellent conveyor of feelings!

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    • #3
      Am I the conveyor of feelings? I hoped you would like it! I have a real backlog of poems, need to get them posted!

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      • #4
        Can I spin it with a little more flow, I hope you don't mind, it's such a lovely poem.
        My bodies soul floats far away
        Endless love, so much to say
        Your sweet softness still within my heart
        As I seach for answers, why did we part
        And count the hours, your image there
        My hope to find, for I still care
        Tattooed this loneliness all over me
        No cure I feel, yet all can see
        Sweet that tempting remembered smile
        Tender kisses in your arms beguiled
        Those quiet walks with no need to talk
        Consumed by loves virtuous lark
        In midnight dreams our spirits fly
        Engulfs my soul, behind these crying eyes
        These tears that flow so sweet and pure
        I reach to hold, yet find no cure
        Move fast it does though day then year
        Fleeting love for you, my one and only dear

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        • #5
          Sorry divot, you and I have different view points on FLOW!

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          • #6
            PS. divot , yes it is a lovely poem! Thanks for saying that, The kurlman

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            • #7
              Nice poem, kurlman.

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              • #8
                You are so very kind, Jiynx.

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                • #9
                  I’ve heard it said that imitation is the purest form of flattery. Unless an ego is to big to compromise.
                  Has every thing been said been done
                  Recycled once an old rerun
                  Been heard before, worn out cliché
                  Is there nothing left to say


                  Is nature just one man’s gift
                  In beauty found and how it fits
                  Or perspective on another plain
                  Although the sunsets still the same


                  If and when love come knocking
                  Shall I let it in or find it shocking
                  Some other’s words do I dare to borrow
                  To leave behind today’s tomorrow


                  Does history not repeat itself
                  From dusty books upon a shelf
                  And lend it’s fear to make it clear
                  Or pity all who venture here


                  There in a song or poem complete
                  To relish heaven sent replete
                  And not as if myself condone
                  Yet write it down as if my own


                  For what good are words, if not repeated
                  That stand though time, so often needed
                  Why linger in a vacuum framed
                  That light in yonder window pain (Shakespeare)

                  I'm sorry for the intrusion

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                    Divot, I really like this!

                • #10
                  Good Job divot, Touche!

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