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My Long Lost Soul (A christian friend who never shared Christ)

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  • My Long Lost Soul (A christian friend who never shared Christ)

    You lived next door to me for years
    We shared our joys our dreams our tears.
    A friend to me you were indeed
    A friend who helped me in my need.
    My faith in you was strong and sure
    We had such trust that should endure.
    No spats between us err arose
    Our friends' were like and so our foes'.

    What sadness then my friend to find,
    That after all you weren't so kind.
    The day my life on Earth did end
    I found you weren't a faithful friend.
    For all those years we spent on Earth
    You never talked of Jesus birth.
    You never spoke of My long Lost Soul
    And of the Christ who'd make me whole.
    I stood in front of God in shame
    My Christian friend you are to blame.
    Your faith, no voice, now flames I share
    My soul now lost please don't despair.

    I plead today from Hell's cruel fire,
    And tell you now my last desire.
    You cannot do a thing for me
    No words today my bond's to free.
    But do not error my friend again,
    Do all you can for soul's of men.
    Tell ALL you know Christ died for thee
    Lest they be cast in HELL with me!

  • #2
    Wow, I really like this one. This reminds me of the Screwtape Letters. Truly, well done.


    • #3
      So, so familiar, yo.


      • #4
        Awesome, rhymarhyma. Well worded. Funny thing is, you don't sound like that in your


        • #5
          I didn't write this one, but I know I've read it before. Many times. My comments are written the way I actually speak. I have a "colorful" vocabulary, I guess. I keep things clean in my poems for the Lord. No doubt.