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  • I'm Sick of This! ( For Him; Ending Included)

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    Last edited by Jiynx Diablo; 09-29-2016, 07:06 PM.

  • #2
    Whoa. Deep, kid. Emotionally deep. No doubt. Me likey.

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    • Jiynx Diablo
      Jiynx Diablo commented
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      Ha, ha, Thanks. It's pretty deep, yeah. I imagine it as a rock song (weird?) and ending softly. Obviously, a woman with a lotta talent is singin' this.

  • #3
    Well, that woman would be yourself. Obviously. You wrote it, you sing it. yeah yeah

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    • Jiynx Diablo
      Jiynx Diablo commented
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      What? Aww, shucks, :P Ya really think so? .~.

  • #4
    I like it ^w^
    Sorry, I'm a grammar Nazi, but "aggravates" (you spelled it "aggrivates") is spelled wrong.
    GOMENOSAI
    I'M A GRAMMAR HITLER
    BUT I REALLY LIKE IT

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    • Jiynx Diablo
      Jiynx Diablo commented
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      Thanks, otaku.poet.

      "Grammer Nazi"... I'M WATCHIN' YOU LADY HITLER.
      BUT I REALLY LIKE YOUR COMMENT.
      (GOMENOSAI?)

    • otaku.poet
      otaku.poet commented
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      Do itashimashite (you're welcome)
      HEHEHEHEEHHE
      AND THANKS
      Gomenosai= sorry

    • Jiynx Diablo
      Jiynx Diablo commented
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      Right. Japanese crazy...I forget.
      I need to learn more.
      Bye Lady Hitler. And Thank You.
      (IN ENGLISH)

  • #5
    Who else would sing your song, kid? If you can sing it in your mind, you can sing it on a stage. No doubt.

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    • Jiynx Diablo
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      You're one of the nicest people ever, man.

  • #6
    "Gomenasai" is Japanese for "I'm sorry".

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    • Jiynx Diablo
      Jiynx Diablo commented
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      I thought so, I just wasn't so sure. I need to learn more Japanese. Thank you for the confirmation. And how do you know that?

  • #7
    Well, thank you very much. No doubt.

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    • Jiynx Diablo
      Jiynx Diablo commented
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      You're welcome.

  • #8
    When I was growing up my Dad was in the Air Force and we lived in Japan for 3 years and I picked up a bit. Although gomenasai was not one of the words I picked up. So I googled it.

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    • Jiynx Diablo
      Jiynx Diablo commented
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      LOL, Electron.John.

  • #9
    Writing is what your feeling, another love gone wrong. You made him sound like a snake.

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    • Jiynx Diablo
      Jiynx Diablo commented
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      Do I? Hmm... yeah, you're right. Thanks for reviewing. Love always goes wrong.

  • #10
    Wow... I love this! You really managed to capture so much feeling and pain in your words. (Which is a good thing!) I can really relate the emotions you use, and I honestly started tearing up at the end!

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    • Jiynx Diablo
      Jiynx Diablo commented
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      Thank you so much. It means a lot when you read this! Crying...it's...a pain reliever.





      It's my daily ritual, almost...

    • LadyParadox
      LadyParadox commented
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      Yeah... For some reason, I love pain... not in a creepy, sadistic way. Pain is just one of the most genuine human emotions; beautiful in its chaos. When a person is hurt, you see who they really are. Sad songs will always be some of the best.

    • Jiynx Diablo
      Jiynx Diablo commented
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      You've said it completely right. Beautiful in its own way.

  • #11
    Very nice!

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    • #12
      Jiynx, you touched me on emotion with your poem, I also agree belt this one out YOURSELF, three stars for emotion!

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      • Jiynx Diablo
        Jiynx Diablo commented
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        Thank you so much, kurlman!

        Orion's Belt!

    • #13
      You are welcome!

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