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    -Faces of One-

    Tender strings for the gentle humanity,
    And bitter-sweet for your experience.
    Bound in paradox by time and mortality
    While unaware of life’s true salience.

    With a contrast of potentials, in eternal agitation -
    By freewill, folly, and cause -
    The resounding crepitation, of false excitation
    Yet still beauty is found in the flaws.

    And Tragedy and glory stand side-by-side,
    With innocence so often in the middle.
    How can you reside,
    Heart and mind applied,
    With this unending, and sorrowful riddle?

    So you seek-out the answers, for want of understanding
    The ebb and flow of reality.
    Whereupon faces of all, transposed onto one
    The answer is sheer totality.

    -Dan Thomas-
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    Hi Dan, Really enjoyed this, the change-up in the rhyme scheme and the internal rhyme crepitation - expectation.


    • Dan Thomas
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      Thanks John! I truly appreciate your feedback, and I'm glad you enjoyed it