COCK-A-DOODLE MOO

[MelFinkelstein]

Rebecca, thanks for those very encouraging words. Now I, too, am smiling...

[RebeccaLynne329]

I love this! It made me smile and that's what I like to get from poems is a happy feeling.

[MelFinkelstein]

Kurlman, thanks very much for the feedback. Most of the lines in my poems are either 6 or 8 syllables, so this one is a little bit longer. Appreciate the warm welcome!

[The kurlman]

Hi Mel, cute poem , I write a lot of these type of poems. If you take out a few words it would read and flow better! I would be glad to discuss it with you . I still like it! The kurlman Some time less is more! Welcome aboard.

[MelFinkelstein]

Reezy the rooster and Carrie the cow
Were the bestest of friends, some way somehow

When Reezy called out, 'cock-a-doodle doo'
Carrie would smile and let out a 'moo'

But the other roosters crowed about Carrie
'She's not like us,' which they found quite scary

And the other cows did not care for Reezy
'He's not like us,' which made them uneasy

And while the roosters and cows remained blinded
Reezy and Carrie stayed more open-minded