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    The secret after 33 years
    is forgetting what's right and fair
    and not holding back the tears
    and learning how not to care
    because a long-lasting marriage
    is never rhyme or reason
    what it really depends on
    is total desperation

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    This poem is thought-provoking. However, I feel as though my feelings aren't agreeing to what your poem seems to be stating, and that is that marriage after 33 years is not a marriage that is joyous but it is from "total desperation", a time of submission, and grim. I have known many elderly couples that have been married for over 33 years who are still very much in love since the very beginning.

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      What’s love for one
      Isn’t love for all
      And does not mean
      To just have a ball
      But pick up when
      You slip and fall
      Nor just stop when
      You’ve hit a wall

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