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    Maggie made a tigeraffe
    Whose neck and claws were long.
    Joey made a birdle,
    A turtle with a song.

    Maria drew a coyokeet,
    A parakeet that howled.
    Mikey built a twinkipede
    While his stomach growled.

    Norm designed a hippadee,
    A hippo that could fly.
    Marsha made an applefish
    That smelled like apple pie.

    Johnny made a catfish
    Not knowing they existed.
    Bernie drew a Venus Guy Trap
    (Bernie's really twisted).


    Well, I made an animal
    With a shiny golden horn
    Part Amazonian Manatee
    And part unicorn.

    And though I liked each creature’s
    Unique designs and deeds,
    I think a little Uni-tee
    Is what this wide world needs.
    Last edited by Joe Mohr; 01-30-2015, 09:25 AM.

  • #2
    Imaginative and kind hearted. I really liked it.

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    • #3
      Thanks!

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      • #4
        Really whimsical and imaginative. You put some thought about combining animals...great job.

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        • #5
          I agree -- this was creative and entertaining, with a sweet message at the end.

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          • #6
            Dr. Seuss would be proud of this one, it's what it brought to mind. I salute your creativity.

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            • Jiynx Diablo
              Jiynx Diablo commented
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              Definetly! Dr. Seuss, bless his heart, was amazing.
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