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  • Sammy B. E. T'hy'la
    started a topic Not as Okay

    Not as Okay

    I think it's rather obvious
    That I'm not as okay as I say.
    But I can't tell him that.
    So when he asks what's wrong, I say with a grin,
    "Nothing, what could be wrong? Why do you ask?"
    I doubt that he ever looks into my eyes
    And sees the dark, pensive thoughts swirling
    In a chaotic, brown-green sea.
    For if I mask my doubts and fears with a smile,
    Why would he feel the need to look further?
    So busy with work and play
    And me
    That I don't blame him.
    But still I wait,
    Dreading, yet hoping,
    For the time he sees through my mask.

  • Sammy B. E. T'hy'la
    commented on 's reply
    Sounds like a plan!

  • Jiynx Diablo
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    Oh God! TOTALLY! I add a little to my story everyday!
    I'll give you the details in Private Messages.

  • Sammy B. E. T'hy'la
    commented on 's reply

    Coolio! Name on there is currently WhoIsThatPointy-EaredAuthor (I plan on changing it soon).
    You bet I read fanfics! I write some, too. Do you?

  • Jiynx Diablo
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    Doesn't matter! Grinning like an idiot? Bah, I do it all the time.
    Fiction Press? Sure, I've never heard of it, but I'll check it out.
    Hey, do you read fanfic? Just a question, Sammy B. E. T'hy'la

  • Sammy B. E. T'hy'la
    commented on 's reply
    I am grinning like an idiot right now. =D Thank you so much!
    I actually have more stuff on Fiction Press, if you're interested. But they're under a different name and sort of old.

  • Jiynx Diablo
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    Totally, Sammy B. E. T'hy'la. People should read your poems more often. Make yourself known!

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  • Sammy B. E. T'hy'la
    commented on 's reply
    Thank you! =D

  • Jiynx Diablo
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    I love your poem! It has a great choice of words.

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  • Sammy B. E. T'hy'la
    commented on 's reply
    Thank you!!!!!!! =D =D I'm glad you like it!
    I don't know, I love feedback but I suppose some people just don't like commenting. When I first joined fanfiction I logged out to leave a review or PMed then.

  • rosa890
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    Yes! "Dreading, yet hoping" spectacular use of words! I can totally relate! And not just with this one, but with a lot of your work! How come nobody's replying to any of your poems?
    Last edited by rosa890; 01-31-2015, 04:03 PM.

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