Not as Okay

[Sammy B. E. T'hy'la]

I think it's rather obvious
That I'm not as okay as I say.
But I can't tell him that.
So when he asks what's wrong, I say with a grin,
"Nothing, what could be wrong? Why do you ask?"
I doubt that he ever looks into my eyes
And sees the dark, pensive thoughts swirling
In a chaotic, brown-green sea.
For if I mask my doubts and fears with a smile,
Why would he feel the need to look further?
So busy with work and play
And me
That I don't blame him.
But still I wait,
Dreading, yet hoping,
For the time he sees through my mask.

[rosa890]

Yes! "Dreading, yet hoping" spectacular use of words! I can totally relate! And not just with this one, but with a lot of your work! How come nobody's replying to any of your poems?

[Sammy B. E. T'hy'la]

Thank you!!!!!!! =D =D I'm glad you like it!
I don't know, I love feedback but I suppose some people just don't like commenting. When I first joined fanfiction I logged out to leave a review or PMed then.

[Jiynx Diablo]

I love your poem! It has a great choice of words.

[Sammy B. E. T'hy'la]

Thank you! =D

[Jiynx Diablo]

Totally, Sammy B. E. T'hy'la. People should read your poems more often. Make yourself known!

[Sammy B. E. T'hy'la]

Coolio! Name on there is currently WhoIsThatPointy-EaredAuthor (I plan on changing it soon).
You bet I read fanfics! I write some, too. Do you?

[Jiynx Diablo]

Oh God! TOTALLY! I add a little to my story everyday!
I'll give you the details in Private Messages.

[Sammy B. E. T'hy'la]

Sounds like a plan!