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    if I were to sit beside you
    in our winter
    between the falling embers
    stale and struggling in the waning winds
    fluttering toward us from dwindled flames

    would you wrap my shoulders in your strength
    and inch closer still
    until our combined warmth
    ignites us once more

    would our chilled breath
    dance in the air before us
    melting into the pale sky
    until we forget that we were ever cold

  • #2
    nice...a really good piece love the lingo....

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    • #3
      Thanks so much!

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      • #4
        I like this. It would be better with some punctuation to insert pauses etc.

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        • #5
          The poem contains some nice imagery. I like the scene you set.

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