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  • For my Love

    I love the way you look at me,
    your eyes so bright and green.
    I love the way you kiss me,
    your lips so soft and smooth.

    I love the way you make me happy,
    and the ways you show you care.
    I love the way you say I love you,
    and the way you're always there.

    I love the way you touch me,
    always sending chills down my spine.
    I love that you are with me,
    and glad that you are mine.
    Last edited by TLO9100; 01-08-2015, 01:41 PM.

  • #2
    That is a very nice love poem TLO9100 (can I call you TLO for short?). You seem to have lost your formatting when you pasted it though. It will be easier to read if you add the formatting and proper punctuation like this:
    "I love the way you look at me,
    your eyes so bright and green.
    I love the way you kiss me,
    your lips so soft and smooth."

    Welcome to the forums and I hope you post some more.

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    • #3
      Excellent! Much better now. Hope to see more of your work.

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      • TLO9100
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        Thank you!
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