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  • ZarrenZ
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    Thank you very much.

  • rhymarhyma
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    Smoooooth writing, kid. Very nice.

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  • ZarrenZ
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    Thank you Bobby.

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  • Bobby Del Boy
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    Yes! I like this poem a lot. I like the imagery of the ocean as the final resting place and comingling it with the cemetary.

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  • ZarrenZ
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    I apologize for it being late but thank you very much. Your kind words mean a lot to me! So, thank you!

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  • writerw2015
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    This piece is really really good Zarren....;o good luck on the big win...'o.... excellent content very good subject matter,,,

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  • ZarrenZ
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    Ululating in a Cemetery

    She grabbed the hand of her only son
    Leading him near the silent side where the ocean rests.
    She pointed outwards and said "Look there upon the horizon.
    It is there where you will find your West."


    Every summer, they visited that spot
    Overlooking the ocean's ample acres view,
    until one day, he placed tulips 'pon that plot-
    the place where the son bid his mother "adieu."

    That day, he ululated amid the ocean
    Reflecting on the finality and faulty lives of some
    whom become objects stuck in an one-looped motion;
    Yet, Nature delivers everybody the same outcome.
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