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  • hitlersdonkey
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    Thank you! I will certainly take your advice, and that means a lot. Thank you once again

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  • Krem7
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    Nice CJ. My advice, if you don't mind, is put more passion in it. Write down your feeling first. then make it into a poem. If this is your first one, you have a future in this genre.

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  • hitlersdonkey
    started a topic Million Pieces

    Million Pieces

    I looked down to you
    My heart dropped and broke into a million pieces

    You laid there looking at me with joyful eyes
    I stood there holding my cries

    The room buzzed with cheers
    Though the only thing I heard was the rushing flow of our tears

    You smiled through the pain
    I cloaked my hands around yours like a chain

    Looking away from your gaze
    Turning towards the door my head in a daze

    ~


    I looked down to you
    My heart dropped and broke into a million pieces

    You laid there with your eyes forever closed
    I stood there my my agonizing cries exposed

    The room was filled with an unpleasant silence
    Though the only thing I heard was my heart beating as loud as sirens

    Your smile no longer shown
    I cloaked my hands around my own

    Looking at the uninhabited sight chilled me to the bones
    Turning towards the door my head dropped like it was filled with stones




    First poem

    -CJ Manuel




    Last edited by hitlersdonkey; 01-08-2015, 11:34 PM.
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