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  • fitzyace13
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    Beautiful rhymes!

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  • Boe Burke
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    That sums it up Rhyma.

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  • rhymarhyma
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    Man, I don't even understand what I'm trying to say sometimes. No doubt.

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  • Boe Burke
    started a topic I will try to Understand

    I will try to Understand

    You can try to help me understand, what
    your thoughts and words have planned.
    Or maybe you could take a stand, why ...
    work so hard and tip your hand.

    Sometimes we want the easy way, do we
    understand what the writer wants to say?
    We ask ourselves does it really pay, we know
    what we meant at the end of the day.

    Hidden beneath our initial reaction,
    a deeper meaning needs extraction.
    It cannot thrive with our inaction, with a
    little more work, these words have traction.

    Now I'll try to practice what I preach,
    and give more effort, understanding
    your speech. Maybe your message isn't
    such a reach, I'll try a little harder,
    you've got a lot to teach.
    Last edited by Boe Burke; 01-20-2015, 07:04 PM.
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