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  • Catz
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    Well, when/if you ever put it to music, please share it here.

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  • Atrously
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    Thank you! Yes, I agree the "fuckings" aren't very much in place for the flow; however, my friend had some ideas for typo changes and break-downs when it would be turned into music so as music they work, but as written word without rhythm they don't fit well.

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  • CeramicCornflake
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    Music? Not bad lyrics, but believe it or not I think the "fuckings" might break up the flow a little bit. That word can have an impact, but my advice would be to use it sparingly.

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  • Catz
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    This poem makes me feel apologetic. It flows nicely, and I certainly feel your frustration. Thank you for sharing!

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  • Atrously
    started a topic Terrible Lyrics for Terrible People

    Terrible Lyrics for Terrible People

    Hello, I'm sorry I've come back again
    I've been lonely lately and I could use a friend
    Let me speak and then I'll leave
    I've lost the last person I could grieve
    Wasted, I'll tell you everything
    Stoned, I'll earn my angel's wings
    I gave up on the sun, my days have never been the same
    I felt your warmth fade from my body, shaking out of shame

    Bite me back, I've had enough
    I'll show you how I can be tough
    Down and down the rabbit hole
    Who knows how far it really goes
    Down and down the bottles flow
    Who knows how low you'll let this go

    I know you'll never care,
    We could've gone anywhere,
    If we'd stayed in bed that day
    Maybe you'd have the strength to stay
    We could've had it all,
    But even angels have to fall
    Your friends were right all along
    And now you're just a sad fucking song

    Bite me back, I've had enough
    I'll show you how I can be tough
    Down and down the rabbit hole
    Who knows how fucking far it goes
    Down and down the bottles flow
    Who knows how god damn low you'll go

    Inside you surge capricious tides,
    Another world you'd always hide
    Vicious swells pull me under,
    Crush my pride and steal my thunder
    Swallow your silence this time
    Choke down bitter words of mine

    Bite me back, break my neck
    Strength is hard, it's easier to wreck
    Down and down we'll always go
    How did we find ourselves so low?

    I've been lonely, I could use a friend
    Hard to believe we are alone at the end.
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