Love in the X-files

[jede]

Xeroxed, is your love,
carved deep within,
Like shadows in distant exiles,
Like hidden mysteries,
found in lost X-files;
In xerox memories,
Your love is like xenoliths
embedded, to perplex me
with your monochrome world.

[UtzoztU]

I like the language/diction here and the theme, good job and familiar. Only thing I thought was perhaps take away the last comma, but that would be personal preference.

[jede]

Thanks a lot for the feedback!
I'm glad you liked it. I will revise for the last comma. Much appreciated

[Johntee]

Xenolith,
an intrusion foreign
to my catechism.
Excellent.

[jede]

Haha, thanks Johntee!
Always appreciate your feedback