Chaos won't win

[jede]

Concededly conquered a coarse mind
Filled with convoluted thoughts,
A cosmic theatre, not so kind,
constantly criticizing all life's choices;
I finally got the courage
To get the doors shut, on damn voices.


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Notes: I'm still working on this one. I feel like I need to add a bit more. But let me know what you think.

[Johntee]

Let me propose this.

Is chaos spontaneous?

How would one resist

Entropy coalescing

in small domains,

tight wound like

clock springs

[jede]

Haha,
I'm sure one way or another we can defy entropy's will. And we'll be able to find order in Chaos