Flashlight

[DepressingPoem]

Flashlight

her smile that casts a light
helps me escape the pressing darkness
without so much as a fight
and regardless of the hardness
she saved me then and saves me now
I only wish I could repay the debt
But eternity couldn’t teach me how
to deal with my regret

-dp


( if the plots not clear let me know It seems a little ambiguous )

[AlexandratheLate]

I liked the ambiguity. Lovely.

[victor]

i like the rhyme and the meter. but it always seems that just when i'm ready for the next verse, there isn't one

[DepressingPoem]

I write in three but there never good enough to share

[RhymeLovingWriter]

I like it just fine the way you have it! Sometimes one and done suits just right.