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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you RLW for reading and commenting.

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Sounding tones of tragedy when souls that meet find they are not meant for each other. You write passion and pathos equally well.

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Delirious

    Delirious


    His love for her was delirious
    Together they had rediscovered
    There was something quite mysterious
    She loved him deeply like no other


    In his fantasy, in his melody
    he only lived to completely love her
    I would look at them both with such envy
    Without each other they truly suffered


    They eventually went their separate ways,
    He became a ghost with no fire inside
    Simply existing and counting the days
    His lifeless eyes showed he wished he had died


    What happened between them, how could this be?
    She had given him up so he might live
    For she loved him past all known boundaries
    prayed one day her decision he’d forgive


    By AlexandratheLate
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