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[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much Vincent.

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you Victor - working with a music writer to see where it goes - will let you know.

[Vincent]

very nice cadence to the lyric I thought, I`ll watch and see where this goes and like Victor I`d like to hear the melody., good luck. Vincent

[victor]

would love to hear the melody

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you much JS. Welcome to the zone.

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much TS. I appreciate it.

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much RLW for reading and your wonderful comment. I appreciate it.

[JakeSullivan]

Nice work!

[The second]

Yes very satisfying keep going

[RhymeLovingWriter]

It's a sad story you're crooning with these lyrics, but they are composed with your beautiful and emotionally charged élan. Kudos! Keep it coming!

[AlexandratheLate]

working on some song lyrics as follows:

Spent

Get me off this merry go round
Put me back on the rollercoaster ride
I’ve seemed to have finally lost
My rose colored lenses along with my pride


I’ve been trying so very hard
To put together the pieces of my heart
But I can still feel all the cracks
From the day you tore my world apart


You took it all freely from me
I had spent on you all the love I saved
There’s nothing left for me to give
It meant nothing to you that I gave and gave


By AlexandratheLate