Your Shadow Almost Touched Me

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much Victor for reading, the like and commenting. I truly appreciate it.

[victor]

good stuff. your style is always refreshing. i hope your love steps out of the shadows

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you so much DP for your beautiful heartfelt comment. I really appreciate your taking the time to read, comment and like. Thank you.

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much Raoul for reading, your lovely comment and the like. Thank you.

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you RLW for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you for reading and the like. I really appreciate it.

[Raoul D'Harmental]

This is a beautiful poem, Alexandra telling of a forbidden love. It reminded me of this poem I read a while back on a similar theme which I think you'd like:

Goodbye

I don't know what bound me to you
As side by side, we walked.
All I know is that I heard you
As in silence, you talked.
And though I saw little of you
My eyes could read you plain.
But as I drew away from you
Did your heart feel my pain
As I whispered goodbye to you?
And did you hear me say
That though you're gone, the thought of you
With me will always stay?

[DepressingPoem]

Lovely as always, While reading this all I can resolve to do is smile and remember the thrills of forbidden love. This is in my opinion the single best thing I've read to date. Well Done!!

[RhymeLovingWriter]

Sounds like a "forbidden romance" of younger days, still in your trademark style, AtL!

[Johntee]

Very expressive
The shadow of untouchable desire So very near, yet still too far

[AlexandratheLate]

Your shadow almost touched me


The world you now live in so far from mine
Try as I may, the hurdle is too great
Depth of despair difficult to define
wreaks havoc on my heart to acclimate


Oh If only I could go back in time
I would love you as no other ever could
We would break out of this world’s paradigm
Crush barriers that are misunderstood


I felt your shadow almost touch my hand
very close yet so far out of my reach
Bodies moved and swayed, sinking in quicksand
Impassable rift, unable to breach


By AlexandratheLate