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    Come sun, shine on,
    Give me excess of it
    So night's companion,
    Festered gloom, be
    Forgot and
    Blown,
    And dried
    Be dawn's
    Dewed eye.


    Last edited by Johntee; 01-14-2023, 07:53 AM.

  • #2
    John I always enjoy your poetry one thing niggles here we go from Blown and Dried to a Dew filled eye

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    • #3
      The blown and dried I envisaged as a flower of night. I've added punctuation to seperate and concertina'd "dew filled eye" to "dewed eye" to give a scan more to my liking.
      Last edited by Johntee; 01-14-2023, 12:22 PM.

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