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    Nothing matters anymore
    I just want to forget and burn it down
    What was a part of me is now history
    All my pathetic dreams dead on the ground

    Nothing is the same anymore
    I want to leave behind and let it die in the wind
    And even if these memories crawl up to me again
    I'll destroy them with my rage, the burning hate within

    All that I've known
    All that I loved
    Forsaken
    All that I've had
    All that I wanted
    Abandoned
    Forsaken, abandoned

    Memories
    Forsaken, abandoned​
    Last edited by Bry89; 12-28-2022, 12:18 AM.

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    This is good I like the anger in it but take out the word ''And'' at the start of some lines for me it reads better without that word

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    • Bry89
      Bry89 commented
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      You're right... they actually sound better without that word. I've made the change.
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