Heal (v2)

[Bry89]

I live this life
I take the damage
And I bleed
Against my will

Relying on time
For these wounds to heal
So for now I bleed
I bleed
I bleed
Against my will

I live this life
Just trying to get on
And I bleed
And I don't know why

The paranoia inside
Should I never heal at all
So for now I bleed
I bleed
I bleed
I bleed
Until my soul runs dry

These wounds, these abrasions
That tell the same kind of story
Even if I heal (Over time)
I still bear the pain inside
~~~

Just about the wound healing process... but I completely forgot that I already wrote about it earlier this year.

Personally, this one's better.

[Sureme]

This reads like soul and rock type of lyric not poem what's v1

[Bry89]

Everything I've posted on this forum _are_ lyrics (with exception of a few haikus). Also, I've provided a link to the original version of the entry in my post ☝️

[Sureme]

Until I hear it in song v2 comes across better, have you recorded any of your lyrics if you have can you post, I too write lyrics and recorded a few of them but haven't recorded anything in a few years, If you have recorded hope you post something thanks.

[Bry89]

No, that would be embarrassing, personally speaking.

[Sureme]

Try recording yourself your lyrics and poems and after a while listen back as if you were the listeners

[Bry89]

NO.

Plus I don't have anything to record with anyway...