Behemoth

[Bry89]

Grotesque, but familiar
Distant but feels so near
But I'm not afraid of you
I won't give in to fear

I'll stand up against you
I'll take you down

A deadly figure but so unreal
What would he want from me?
My life or just a useless favour
It doesn't matter, he's dead to me

I'll stand up against you
I'll take you down

To you I may be weak
But in truth, I have the power
To take someone like you down
Whether it's of words
Or my strength that holds me up
You will not stand in the way of life
I will take you down
And I'm not bluffing
I will take you down
Don't you forget it

[Sureme]

I like this but that ''And''

[Bry89]

"And" what of it?

[Sureme]

''And I'm not bluffing'' Reads to me you're bluffing take out ''And'' maybe even include the ''F'' word

I liked it up until the ''And'' sorry

[Bry89]

That line just means that "I'm not joking". And no, it's staying the way it is, and I don't normally use profanity in my entries unless I absolutely need to.

[Sureme]

That's okay I meant no offense, if you have any dislikes on anything I post then please let me know thanks