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    When drowsiness fogs the moon from my window

    and smudges gratitude from my lips

    I’ll undress

    my armour of overmindfulness

    To embrace you

    In my dreams

    Where my skin

    Doesn’t even know

    It’s thankful like cats fur

    And my eyes won’t remember

    Why they were reduced to tears

    Trying to embrace your light

    And other nights open

    Truer links between us

    So beautiful

    Even the stars can not bear it any longer

    A ray of morning light..

  • #2
    beautiful lunar glide

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      Thank you PP. Happy you are still active here. Looking forward to catching up on your work...

  • #3
    Oh man, LG, I agree with Parkisonspoet - this is beautiful!

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      Thank you RLW!

  • #4
    I'll undress
    My armour of
    Overmindfulness
    To embrace you
    In my dreams

    Great
    To read
    Again your
    Novel turns of
    Phrase in praise
    Of Selene, the moon
    Undimmed by Time

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      Thanks johntee ..I like your response..

  • #5
    Linear Glide - I liked this LG. Good work. Namyh

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      I appreciate that Namyh

  • #6
    simply fantastic lg awesome

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      I'm glad you like it TS

  • #7
    I agree with all the comments - Just beautiful!!

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      Thanks ATL.. I appreciate your visit
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