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  • AlexandratheLate
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    I could feel the icy cold here. Well done.

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  • The Kid In A Cell
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    Thank you for reading.

  • The Kid In A Cell
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    oh, right. Thanks for the tip.

  • Zillah
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    I feel buried in the snow with you... almost freezing. The imagery drowns me with your sorrow, cool.

    Heads up, in line 8 "there" might be "their"

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  • avensis
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    It's really beautiful thank you for sharing

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  • The Kid In A Cell
    started a topic Too Cold

    Too Cold

    Baby I'm too cold now
    I can't breathe it out
    All this pain inside
    I can't even hide
    From my own damn mind
    Sorrow climbs to the sky
    So heavy; buried alive
    By all their bloody lies
    I'll never be the same
    No, I will never be
    No, I don't want to change
    But it is not my will
    Fell out of heaven's gates
    Fell through a sky so fake
    Into a frozen Lake
    But my soul didn't break
    Now I'm soo cold frostbite
    No, I can't breathe in ice
    So dark, where's the damn light
    Can't tell the day from night
    Someone help me; find me
    I'm so lost I can't see
    I'm too cold I can't sleep
    I'm so cold but I can't freeze

    Yours Truly,
    TKIAC
    Last edited by The Kid In A Cell; 07-29-2022, 06:28 PM.
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