Too Cold

[AlexandratheLate]

I could feel the icy cold here. Well done.

[The Kid In A Cell]

Thank you for reading.

[The Kid In A Cell]

oh, right. Thanks for the tip.

[Zillah]

I feel buried in the snow with you... almost freezing. The imagery drowns me with your sorrow, cool.

Heads up, in line 8 "there" might be "their"

[avensis]

It's really beautiful thank you for sharing

[The Kid In A Cell]

Baby I'm too cold now
I can't breathe it out
All this pain inside
I can't even hide
From my own damn mind
Sorrow climbs to the sky
So heavy; buried alive
By all their bloody lies
I'll never be the same
No, I will never be
No, I don't want to change
But it is not my will
Fell out of heaven's gates
Fell through a sky so fake
Into a frozen Lake
But my soul didn't break
Now I'm soo cold frostbite
No, I can't breathe in ice
So dark, where's the damn light
Can't tell the day from night
Someone help me; find me
I'm so lost I can't see
I'm too cold I can't sleep
I'm so cold but I can't freeze

Yours Truly,
TKIAC