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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Heart wrenching sad. Sorry for your loss.

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  • The Kid In A Cell
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    I'm glad that you enjoyed it and took the time out to read it. Thank you, Tony.

  • The Kid In A Cell
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    Thank you RLW. My friend died a few months ago but i just had to write something for him.

  • Tony Grannell
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    A rush of sorrow in this profoundly sad and perfectly composed poem. As cold as death and as the truth can be. Truly excellent.

    Kind regards,
    Tony.

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Powerful stuff here. Very sorry for your loss.

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  • The Kid In A Cell
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    SoldieR

    Soldier
    Not a mourner
    Free to roam
    Try not to get cornered
    Don't look back
    Always moving forward
    Because the cold world only gets colder

    Run on broken legs
    Fly with broken wings
    Flashbangs from my past
    I still hear the bloody rings
    Gotta shoot when you can
    Run when their rifles sing
    Have to keep your eyes open
    Don't ever risk a blink
    Sorry for those who died
    They got buried with their sins
    They always had to run
    Had no time to praise the king
    Blood-stained memories
    Pain and sorrow is what they bring
    Never thought that you'd die
    Man, I really felt the sting
    Bulletproof vest
    couldn't stop a bullet to the head
    Massive pain in my chest
    But not a single tear was shed
    I don't think that I'll forget
    All the meals that we shared
    See you on the other side
    RIP brother, cheers

    Gotta go now
    Got a gun now
    Moving way too fast
    Gotta slow down
    Got no time for no tears
    Got no time for no fears
    I keep losing my peers
    And nobody seems to care
    Soldiers suffer to survive
    Have no scheduled time for grief
    The only time we feel
    Is when we allow ourselves to bleed...

    Soldier
    Not a mourner
    Free to roam
    Try not to get cornered
    Don't look back
    Always moving forward
    Because the cold world only gets colder

    Yours Truly,
    TKIAC
    Last edited by The Kid In A Cell; 07-12-2022, 07:45 PM.
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